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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-01-12 06:12 PM


If She Was Close


When I went away from my sweetheart,
I thought that I would miss her,
but I didn't miss her, I only missed
her lips, and her sweet kiss, and the
soft words of love she says to me that
always touch my heart, those words I
love to hear when together or far apart.

"The last time we met, she said
the next time we meet, she wants
to see a big smile on my face."

Wish we were close right now, so
close that she could see my smile.

JamesLee
January11
2005


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JL
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1 posted 2005-01-12 06:15 PM


Good one JamesMichael...

JL


iliana
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2 posted 2005-01-12 06:17 PM


You don't miss her much! hehehe  Enjoyed this, JamesLee.   .....jo
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3 posted 2005-01-12 06:50 PM


*grin* Like this James!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-01-12 07:24 PM



Startime55
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5 posted 2005-01-12 07:27 PM


Oh yes...this is lovely and very romantic...

Susan
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6 posted 2005-01-12 07:42 PM


I can see that you didn't miss her - just everything about her

Enjoyed -  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Juju
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7 posted 2005-01-12 08:29 PM


Thats so sweat (;
Juju

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8 posted 2005-01-13 01:50 AM


i have definetly missed your romantic heart


LeeJ
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9 posted 2005-01-13 06:52 AM


supurb happiness written all over your face


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