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Open Poetry #34

Cause and Affect

angele
Junior Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 35
Malta (tiny island in the Med)

0 posted 2005-01-11 12:36 PM

A stoic statue
In an armchair
Bedazzled by life
And not by me.

My words shrugged off
Your shoudlers
Into infinity.

A word, a look
Sometimes hits home,
the look in your eyes
Lets something slip.

But how far?
How deep?

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-11 12:52 PM

considerable ponderings...

nice thoughts

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-01-11 01:11 PM

I like this. Interesting. Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-01-11 06:25 PM

Brilliant.

Dave

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2005-01-11 07:52 PM

I like this one.

Juju

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2005-01-12 01:16 AM

Oh I like this a lot, but I hated to see it end so soon.

Very nice write, angele~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-01-12 05:27 AM

pretty cool write here

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2005-01-12 11:06 AM

sorry to have missed this, and your earlier work. impressive write, looking forward to reading more

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-01-12 07:24 PM

enjoyed...

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

9 posted 2005-01-12 07:29 PM

You make a person look inside as they read these words...to ponder inner self...a great read...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2005-01-12 09:23 PM

A glimpse....a still-life...that's what this is. Enjoyed.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

11 posted 2005-01-13 01:19 AM

Life's tough journey.
Well understood.

JL

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