Open Poetry #34 |
Hither My Soul |
babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
hither my soul perishes into the petaled hours, inclement and incorrigible its stinging quips of flesh stiffen among the white, indulgent thorns of your absence, tenuous as love quickens out of the softest lips, parted and dim upon the syrinx, syllables lay bare the tremulous heart, rathe in its aurulent crescendo of lean candles, hungry in this silence, trachea a shuddering sacrament of ivory roses burning the silken limit of my body congeals Matisse prisms of white leopard, undulant bodies enter limbs, a seamless fluency in perishing rhythms, come hither in the svelt and urgent cruelty of the cobalt silences you give my soul as it quivers in its body of lazy jade, inclement and lithe in its red herring veil of roses, the color of flesh, incorrigible, in your absence. 2004 copryright BabygirLPress **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
oooooeeeeee! quote: Hot damn! quote: |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
great work, this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Mysteria...you are a source of constant support...(((thank you)))! Aenimal~thank you, dear... James~thanks for stopping by to read... love&light, **BabygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
yep..yet another wonderful addition.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Thank you, Susan... very kind of you to say.... **babygirl** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
babygirlwlove Do you think he'd understand the depth of this? This doesn't simmer it boils. LOL Enjoyed |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Seymour... thanks for checking this out... love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enjoyed babyG and I am haunted |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you, Dark A~ **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Geeze Louise, knowing everytime I click on your name, I'm in for a rare and exquisite treat...what a write lady! Tremendously beautiful |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Passionate, poignant, powerful....yet very intelligent....I very much enjoyed reading...~P Such imagery: "...crescendo |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice.. intense and layered... very nice indeed |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thanks for hitting this, guys... love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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