Open Poetry #34 |
And the Walls Came Crashing Down . . . . . . . . (Inspired by the Tsunami) |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Photo From Webshots +*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ My world’s gone topsy turvy and I know not up from down, I’m totally discombobulated and wear a frozen frown. My home and land has sunk beneath the inundating waves, I’m sinking fast to the ocean floor where lay lost watery graves. My lungs are full of burning brine, my eyes see not the sun, I’m leaving all I’ve loved behind, now that my days are done. My cries are drowned by crashing surf ~ no one can hear my pleas, I’m whipped and tossed and pulled right down with no kind reprieves. Giant walls of water, they squeeze the air from lungs, Visions of my life reel by as into the leagues I plunge. I cannot see through the darkness ~ it appears the mid of night, I pray that God will find me and return me to the Light. Suddenly I heard a song that was sung by angel choir, I was lifted up from the briny deep and out of my straights of dire. They laid me on a downy pillow ~ ‘twas soft as a cotton cloud, I gasped when I realized, I was vested in white shroud. A brightly shining sun warmed up my weary soul, For angels had delivered me to God who made me whole. Forever I'll be grateful to have been saved through Heaven’s Grace, But my heart was sad and empty as my eyes searched Eden’s place. My loved ones must have perished and been taken away from me, And now they are missing at the bottom of the sea. When I felt the pain of loss and the sadness of separation, I heard the joyous laughter of my family in elation. Arms were wrapped about me and kisses graced each cheek, My family had been lifted up from the briny deep. We may have lost our lives and left the earthly plane, But now we are a family in this heavenly domain. Death is not the enemy. You simply change in form. You rise up into heaven where the skies are blue and warm. There is no pain or pestilence, no fears or tears of woe. Only joy and happiness in a world of Light and glow. +*+-*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (01-10-2005 08:58 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You have such a beautiful heart, my friend... to find something positive in the midst of such horror is a gift... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
especially love the last verse, Linda hugs M |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
"Only joy and happiness in a world of light and glow" yeah must be nice on the other side of that pearl gate. nicely done |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"There is no pain or pestilence, no fears or tears of woe. Only joy and happiness in a world of Light and glow." DITTO JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you have given hope to those effected by one of the most catastrophic catastrophies in history. Excellent read and write.... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Linda, this is indeed special and brought tears of sorrow and then tears of joy at the end. Your heart overflows with God's spirit and grace and you pass it along as comfort to so many. Luv you, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
EA, only you could have written this, such a tender rendering. Be proud of yourself for this gift. Very nicely done. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel And you write like an angel. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
You ARE an angel! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah Linda - you see beyond the fog of pain - beautifully written Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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