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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-10 12:01 PM

art©r.young
~~~

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2005-01-10 12:04 PM

mmmm.. you must have a very pretty backside

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-01-10 12:10 PM

a pleasure to read...love it

M

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

3 posted 2005-01-10 06:12 PM

whether i do or don't isn't the point. comment on the work or don't comment at all. thanks.

~~~

thank you, M.

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

4 posted 2005-01-11 01:14 AM

I dont think i could just put ONE berse there. Some how it would seem to need an eternal poem

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2005-01-11 01:59 AM

Hey Snow,
This very beautiful.
Enjoyed the read

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2005-01-11 07:52 AM

a woman is a poem
just waiting for the ink
to complete her rhyme

enjoyed it ms snow

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-01-11 07:58 AM

this was immensly speaking harmony

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2005-01-11 08:49 AM

fantastic and awesome as all your work

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2005-01-12 03:29 PM

silky write snow, great work

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2005-01-12 03:50 PM

Reminds me of an old song, can't remember the title, but it goes something like this:

Oh....Yeah!

.

JL

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

11 posted 2005-01-12 07:20 PM

Good write Snow! ^_^

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2005-01-12 07:22 PM

beautiful!

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

13 posted 2005-01-12 07:24 PM

A very sensual poem...well done...

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

14 posted 2005-01-12 08:56 PM

I like this Snow...heck I am lying...I love it. This is sultry. Thanks for the well wishes. I am doing better. Took the day off work though. Really congested. Bravo sweetie...bravo!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

15 posted 2005-01-12 09:17 PM

Love the color.....and the words.

....jo

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