Open Poetry #34 |
Speaking of Towers |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Speaking of Towers I built myself a tower of seem Of multi fabric power of dream The furniture of memories wood Carved of patterns understood And in the yard a wishing well The bucket made of tortes shell Whose waters ran of clear incite And sparkled like the stars at night My path was like a rainbows scene Where grass grew forty shades of green With flowered hues a mirrored sky That made me heave a heart felt sigh It is a state of ecstasy Built upon a fantasy A theater of my inner mind A goldmine, we all seek to find It takes a loving caring heart To make this precious work of art And takes a pinch of droll in dole To season up the goal of soul |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A theater of my inner mind A goldmine, we all seek to find A you my friend, are a true Masterpiece One very cuddly and wise Love your marvelous grins which beam like a lighthouse through the lexis of your words. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And takes a pinch of droll in dole" Morning Sy, and I sure feel as though I could use a pinch this morning Maybe make me wake up a bit faster, ya think? Love this morning's write. ~Morning hugs, smiles & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderfully descriptive words Sy. Much enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, You are a sweetheart and the top of the morning to ya. Nancy, Maybe a would help. scorpio, Nice reply, thank you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
My path was like a rainbows scene Where grass grew forty shades of green With flowered hues a mirrored sky That made me heave a heart felt sigh . wonderful rhyming~~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A theater of my inner mind ---------------- and I want a front row seat for the show. (Randy wants popcorn-extra butter) LOL *ww* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
And in the yard a wishing well The bucket made of tortes shell Whose waters ran of clear incite And sparkled like the stars at night I have lots of pennies saved up. May I toss some into your lovely wishing well? Enjoyed this Seymour. hugs, Chris |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
This was beautiful, Seymour, loved every word!!! Have a blessed day!! -- Becka |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My path was like a rainbows scene Where grass grew forty shades of green With flowered hues a mirrored sky That made me heave a heart felt sigh ~*~ Now, you put that line in there JUST because you know I know you know that I love the color green...in all of its 40 shades and then some! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thank you dear. JM, I'll send two tickets, winkiewinkie stinky Chris, Hugs back and thank you. saved, Glad you liked it. Sunshine, And you are shade 41. Hugs |
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