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Sight of self
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Sight of self |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
darkness ruined a dark lit night glistening on heat burning watching crescent heated red hot light grappling to melt ore in false images for punters paying for sharades of prefabrication painted in safety approved steps to falsehood in body we saw in a molten fire the broken paths that would not allow our joining as we failed to learn and thus entrapped in atrophy we burnt in a fire of knowledge |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
in false images for punters paying for sharades of prefabrication painted in safety approved steps to falsehood You've touched this in a nutshell..can't help remembering how naieve and excited I was upon my very first computer... Thought I'd touch the world, meet people and chat about their cultures...only to learn the mean ness of life, and the hurt of lies...and I still can't understand it to this day...how and why people get off on pretending to be who they are not... Not that I haven't met some very outstanding, honest and cultured people, but met some very sleezy ones as well, which frightens me for our children. Good one Dave |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
we burnt in a fire of knowledge thinking how true your words are... and after reading Lee's response..I think that as far as the computer goes, many pretend to be whom they wish they could be and sometimes learn more about themselves, not always to the negative... M |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wise words |
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