This Want, Nay Yearning That Presses From Lips

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EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2005-01-08 10:48 AM

This Want, Nay Yearning That Presses From Lips

To weave words well in obsequious odes,
One has to have walked the lesser-known roads,
But to plait words into ballads of love,
One need only pen what the heart speaks of.

Flowery speech writ in Pindaric mode,
Doth pretty discourse but ‘tis naught but code,
Because seldom a courtly, “I love you,”
Earned not a response for ‘twas spoken true.

This want, Nay yearning that presses from lips,
For thee my darling’s my lunar eclipse,
O’ wed me sweet ache to she my revered,
For I’d have the kisses which long I’ve feared.

Alas audacity be not this strong,
This verse be not but another swan song,
Betwixt a books covers let this lay lie,
Be-still the heart for my need I’d deny.

It’s snowing outside let it veil this ache,
For I would forget the love I forsake.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-01-08 11:54 AM

Oh, sorrow in my heart - such love, such a sweet soul in these words - how could she not accept and return such affection should she know of it -

beautifully penned - the ache is felt-

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-01-08 12:06 PM

Always such beautiful words bleed from your magic pen Kevin.
Very much enjoyed the read.
I am in awe.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-01-08 01:27 PM

oh Kevin, I feel the tears of sorrow here

wishing you a better day tomorrow

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-01-08 01:29 PM

EvocativeVerse2
A delight to read, enjoyed.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-01-08 11:51 PM

Sometimes you do all the right things, give your heart completely, and then they stomp on it....some people don't know love when they see it. Some run from it fearful of change or being tied down....I know I have just went through this myself.

You gave your heart, put it out there...hats off to you!

From one hurting soul to another!
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2005-01-09 01:25 PM

Hey Sweetie,
Sad but beautifully written.
Michelle knows your love is strong
for her.

Hugs

Amour Vous

;-)

Within this heart you'll find love

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2005-01-09 01:29 PM

Heartrending in its power to touch the inner soul...filled with a yearning...magnificent writing that brings tears to the eyes...

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