Open Poetry #34 |
Temperatures & Thermostats |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
outside sun blazes melting foreheads of the renovators next door- didn't they start that project last year? inside, winter has arrived again I experience your warm browns regarding me with a cautious frown shields up, we warily patrol newly staked territory in full agreement that no prisoners will be taken my total warfare frown battles silently with your cool regard we dance the rigid steps of mistrust, flamboyantly avoiding any contact in an effort to goad into action eight-thirty am, times up! with a cold nod we part- you to your station across town, and I, here with the mini warriors in the making five-thirty pm you are back battle scarred from work immediately on alert from this morning's stand off my hair, turned springy fright wig from pool duty conjures a smile you attempt to hide to hold my tempest at bay your arms open wide in white flag wave of "willya?" instantly, I'm in grateful for the love and comfort always there for me later, another battle shall be waged but there'll only be winners here tonight... ~tier 8/04 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I like this one Tier! Loved that ending too! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
exceptionally pretty Very well done |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
AHA... you threw some curves into this one... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! I enjoyed! |
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