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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2005-01-05 05:37 PM

My thoughts escape me,
Addicted to bleeding for you.
In love with the pain,
I can’t see past it.
It’s your sweet torment
That keeps me coming back
Back for more…and more…
Our whole world was false,
Leaving us with shattered hearts.

You were the flame,
That set me on fire,
The one that didn’t leave,
The one that gave me happiness,
The one that gave me…a reason to live.

The promises that were made,
And were so easily broken,
Keep coming back to haunt me,
To keep me shaking in the night,
To hide my cries from watchful eyes,
And kept me drowning in my pain.
The shadows welcomed me,
With open arms,
And they never….never…
Left me lonely.

You were the poison,
That crept into my mind,
The one that killed me from the inside,
The one that destroyed my soul,
The one that made me run away…
And turned my heart to stone.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-01-05 07:30 PM

You were the poison,
That crept into my mind,
The one that killed me from the inside,
The one that destroyed my soul,
The one that made me run away…
And turned my heart to stone.

Ah hon, it might have brought you down but me knowing you the way that I do?
Your to darn strong to let it destroy you, your to beautiful, and
your just way to damn smart gal.
Now that you have seen some darkness
your light will shine brighter than ever.

Very well done Stac...and I MEAN that...
and gads, I see alot of me in you...even when I was at your age....
wonder why? lol....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-01-05 07:37 PM

"My thoughts escape me,
Addicted to bleeding for you.
In love with the pain,
I can’t see past it.
It’s your sweet torment
That keeps me coming back
Back for more…and more…"

wow...this is so powerful and would make such an awesome song.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2005-01-05 07:52 PM

Thank you both, very much, I'm glad you liked this, I'm pretty happy with the way this one turned out too.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-01-05 07:53 PM

Then, if you are happy? I'm am tickled gold!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-01-05 07:57 PM

You SHOULD be happy with this..
by far my favorite and in my opinion {for what it's worth

} is one of your best ever. What talent....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-01-06 04:54 AM

NIce writing...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2005-01-06 05:23 AM

I know the feeling here

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

8 posted 2005-01-06 03:40 PM

Thank you very much.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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