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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-01-05 11:50 AM


I see you there—
smiling upon me

in the grin

of the crescent moon

laughing down
your warm love sounds

from the heavens

of lavender blue

winking at me
in that knowing way

yes, lover—

I see you there
And feel the glow of you

s.a.t.


Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-01-05 11:51 AM


nice, warm and glowing with beauty Susan. Well done gal.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-01-05 11:57 AM


Such a gentle touch of your pen..
Nicley done poetess Susan.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

SEA
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3 posted 2005-01-05 12:57 PM


big smiles this is....

Susan
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4 posted 2005-01-05 02:38 PM


thank you friends - the moon was simply delightful this morning winking at me from the sky -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2005-01-05 03:55 PM


full monty?

such a bad bad girl susan

kewl write lady

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6 posted 2005-01-05 06:29 PM


This is so nicely written Susan...

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

JL
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7 posted 2005-01-05 07:03 PM


Way to go Susan.  Great write!

JL

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2005-01-05 10:17 PM


the moon
is full of surprises

never empty of possibility

Susan
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9 posted 2005-01-06 10:35 AM


Smiling - am glad you all enjoyed my morning view -

Hugs - Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

froggy
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10 posted 2005-01-06 02:07 PM


Wow! another beautiful read.

:-)

Ericc
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11 posted 2005-01-06 04:11 PM


Wonderful write Susan...perhaps my
favorite of all of my favorites from you!

Eric

Susan
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12 posted 2005-01-06 08:50 PM


Froggy - thanks and hugs

Eric - how delighted I am - your kindness gifts me smiles

Hugs - Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

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