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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 remember when it was us there... then.... and my heart was yours without reservation no complications no hesitation only the blind innocence of love reminded of that time that we look upon now as our ‘could have been’ that moment wished for again.... when dreams collide tangling yesterday, today twisting ‘round my heart waking me with wistful wishes of how it ‘should have been’ us there..... then..... ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
when dreams collide tangling yesterday, today ~*~ Remember your early days in Pip? See the promise unfolding?  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan...lovely feel to this with just the right touch of ache. Hugs~ In the midst of winter, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Susan - this verse, the image - beautifully blended for maximum effect - wonderfully done  SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
without reservation no complications no hesitation only the blind innocence of love ah, yes ..... beautiful SEA. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
so play it backwards and say uoyevoli three times and if he don't show dial 1 800 YES DARK (grin) enjoyed this sea |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
tangled yesterday/today very definitive! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"remember when it was us there... then.... and my heart was yours without reservation no complications no hesitation only the blind innocence of love" *Sigh*...you know how this one touches me. Beautiful write. Hugs, Lizzie. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...this is so poignantly beautiful. Eric |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful Susan! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wonderful heartfelt poetry! JL |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
So many of yours were "favorites" of mine...but I do believe this tops the heap! Very pretty, my friend. jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Eloquent... believe in what your heart feels... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
saying 'thank you' doesnt seem enough for all the warm fuzzies you all give me for each of you (((hugs))) and Lizzie...  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sighs...how pretty this music.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Such a beautiful flow of words...James |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
I loved it SEA.... |
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