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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-05 08:12 AM

some velvet combine
where gold has fingernails
and I don't mind
the running of my skin
the jagged scar
from smile to agony

I know the flavor too
of your eyes in mornings
when the night has cooled
and they are back to amber
when the molten is punctured
you say you love that word

when used properly
and that word too
as long as there are marks
on me to equal those on you
inside and out of the heart
deep enough not to peel

when next we cranch our sins
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Dark

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-01-05 08:15 AM

as long as there are marks
on me to equal those on you
inside and out of the heart
deep enough not to peel

In prime form this morning Ds you are....

especially enjoyed the layers of depth in this..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-01-05 08:15 AM

cool write

good morning Dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-01-05 08:26 AM

Decisions, decisions...
which line to copy as
"best"...

or just to leave
a sigh?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-01-05 09:49 AM

"I know the flavor too
of your eyes in mornings
when the night has cooled
and they are back to amber"

this...here....yeah....

awesome

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-01-05 10:24 AM

Oooh, oooh - new word - cranch - had to go look it up - like it

and the fingernails of gold - the lines deep enough - shivers - can feel this one D-

Hugs -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2005-01-05 06:55 PM

Very nice . . .

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-01-05 09:44 PM

as long as there are marks
on me to equal those on you
inside and out of the heart
***************************
mark me
i'm already an inked woman
i can take it baby

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