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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-01-05 07:11 AM

Petty-point

My love has caught an uplift breeze
That flew me to the point of tease
With fruit of pick of rare anoint
To read into my counter point

It is a prime of counter choose
With variations on the muse
That flashes on horizons bend
And aids me in my comprehend

It laces webs with sparkling dew
Makes jewelry of natures hue
Weaves within my minds conceive
A lace of awe that I believe

And though I practice every day
Still she seems a space away
I do my best to paint the sky
And jewel the dew of natures lie

But somehow and I don’t know why
I always end up with a sigh.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-01-05 07:24 AM

Look at you sparkle...
I think your petite pointe
has a spangled bangle or two
glinting through the smile of you...

'cause I know I am!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-01-05 07:42 AM

and your sigh rubs off on me

nice one Sy

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-01-05 09:08 AM

"And though I practice every day
Still she seems a space away
I do my best to paint the sky
And jewel the dew of natures lie

But somehow and I don’t know why
I always end up with a sigh"

Beautiful beautiful Sy!
Now this one left me with a smile and a sigh.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-01-05 09:44 AM

It laces webs with sparkling dew
Makes jewelry of natures hue
Weaves within my minds conceive
A lace of awe that I believe

*sigh* Perfect way to start my day ....with your wonderful words. hugs, Chris

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2005-01-05 09:47 AM

BRAVO! what a gorgeous write Sy!
*sigh*
divine rhyme

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-01-05 02:08 PM

It laces webs with sparkling dew
Makes jewelry of natures hue
Weaves within my minds conceive
A lace of awe that I believe

How beautiful! *S* You end up with lots of sighs... ours... *S*

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-01-05 02:39 PM

a sigh - yes - a thousand words contained in one breath -

Enjoyed this -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2005-01-05 05:29 PM

Sighing...Now you know how your readers feel!

I love the spirit of this write, Dear Whimsical One!

~ and you "dew" paint the sky with the sparkling jewels of your Light.

Love & Sy Light,
EA

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

9 posted 2005-01-05 06:30 PM

I enjoyed this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2005-01-05 07:30 PM

Sunshine
I could never sparkle like your sunshine.

passing,
And you rub my aladins lamp.

Nancy,
Love your comments.

Chris,
Hugs back my dear.

Midnitesun,
Thank you for the bravo.

suthern,
Your comments are always a delight to read.

Susan,
A wonderful reply, thank you.

Earth Angel,
To have an Angels reply is a precious thing.

Alli,
Thank you my dear.

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