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Love song |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 There is no perfect love song no magical melody no rhyme of words in rhythm to describe this love for you that sings inside of me... I fumble to depict the dedication in emotion that is my heart, for you a love beyond devotion to see eternity through thoughts stutter emotive expression is tangled up with heartbeats and what I wish I knew how to say but of endless depth’s of desire how could I possibly convey? There simply is no equal eloquence no language to explain or define what happens to my soul when your eyes capture mine ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've never stumbled... but you've enraptured... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
There simply is no equal eloquence no language to explain or define what happens to my soul when your eyes capture mine ~~~yes~~that is exactly how it is M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
beautiful SEA ! hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Ahhhh, Yes, Love seems to be an endless well of inspiration and even though words may fail or even come close to describing it, I believe that you have given us a most delightful taste of it here. I do appreciate the deep deep love and devotion that you express here. So very inspiring. -Bob |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good grief girl, you sure did!  LOL, now take my advise anyway. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmm - definitely a composition of love - SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
There simply is no equal eloquence no language to explain or define what happens to my soul when your eyes capture mine OH WOW Sea, just how perfect is this!! It captures everything pure and good in love....wonderful write. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ When the night breathes poetic sighs from your inking well ... I am left breathlessly touched by your thoughts~ LOVE THIS, I do~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL Susan!!! I love this one SO much! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, but you do so eloquently and emotively express yourself! EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
emotive expression is tangled up with heartbeats and what I wish I knew how to say but of endless depth’s of desire how could I possibly convey? There simply is no equal eloquence no language to explain or define what happens to my soul when your eyes capture mine Sea, this is so how I feel about my Honey-Love. It gets so frustrating at times when words just can't express the love he and I feel for each other. I'm keeping this one in my library. Hugs, Ethel |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Exactly. This is beautiful! Love the flow of it, and how it's so full of depth and honesty. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
she is pretty the girl in lady love enjoyed you here sea |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very enjoyable love song indeed. "Thoughts stutter" and isn't that just the quickest way to let him know? A blush too ... hanging there between you, can be understood as the most wonderful declaration of love. But we are poets and poets want words! You choose them so very well here! Love, Margherita |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
La Belle Dame Sans Merci- A lovely image for a lovely poem. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Susan .... this was a heartsong expressed perfectly Hope |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Sea, this is absolutely beautiful! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely done...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish I could write like this |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
"thoughts stutter emotive expression is tangled up with heartbeats and what I wish I knew how to say but of endless depth’s of desire how could I possibly convey?" This was my favorite part. Great poem!! Jezzika |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love this...! "There simply is no equal eloquence no language to explain or define what happens to my soul when your eyes capture mine" ...exactly... Hugs, Lizzie. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Very nice!!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just wanted to say thank you all so very much for your wonderful replies. You all make me smile. thank you |
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