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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2005-01-04 08:10 AM

Obsessing again late at night
just can't sleep, losing the fight
here we go for another round
another round of heartache

you lie there in your peaceful dreams
righteous, pious, and yes, serene
another night I cannot fight
another round of heartache

here it comes, the stress and guilt
but you are peaceful to the hilt
you are calm, you've done no wrong

nothing wrong

but me...

~tier

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2005-01-04 08:24 AM

painful... my friend...

well done... as usual.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-01-04 08:42 AM

You're on a roll
Now go for the gut

I know you can.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-01-04 09:26 AM

Gawd this aches Tier...
The hurt feels deep.
Well done.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2005-01-04 01:33 PM

Thank you, Captain, good to "see" you!

Sunshine, this is an old poem with old thoughts. You know me, I write heartache.

Enchantress, you are precious.

~tier

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-04 07:08 PM

Maybe a hug would help a little bit?...

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-01-05 08:00 AM

oh

I know this well

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2005-01-05 09:30 AM

Flowed well,
right into the ache of the heart...

Sad words.
But quite well said.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2005-01-05 09:40 AM

"Wrong" ... in your eyes only, but certainly it's enough to hurt.
And you said it well!
Love, Margherita

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-01-06 09:03 AM

and this to, shall pass....

it is during these lost times, I try to convince myself that one day soon, I will look back upon it with a smile knowing it wasn't so bad as thought at the time, and there were blessings shining through the darkness.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2005-01-06 04:16 PM

You captured this pain in lyrical beauty...no easy thing to do.

Eric

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

11 posted 2005-01-06 05:04 PM

This is a song. A country cry-in-my-beer song, but a song nonetheless. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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