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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-01-04 07:48 AM


Upon the Edge

I fair upon the edge of this
Of peppers sting and honey’s bliss
The force of each has caught my sail
And I am bracing on impale

The sky is fair a crystal blue
The mornings due is crystal new
The North Star has caught my bow
And I am racing in the now.

The brine has coated me with white
The burn and sweet has caught me tight
And I am pickled in the hold
Eating into every fold

I cannot live in ones domain
Even though I sport a cane
I try to mix an even goal
To eat of each a proper bowl

And in this vagrancy of flight
I try my best to do what’s right


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2005-01-04 08:28 AM


I fair upon the edge of this
Of peppers sting and honey’s bliss

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

and that will be my way cool, winkie line of the day.

You walk a fine line in rhyme sweet Sy-guy.

Im headed out the door...things to do in evermore.

*ww*


Elan
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2 posted 2005-01-04 08:28 AM



Sometimes Sy,
that is all we can do...


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-01-04 08:34 AM


JM,
Then you are a busy bee and I thought you were a moth? Winkiewinkie


Elan
You are right,

scorpio
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4 posted 2005-01-04 08:36 AM


A good philosophy Sy.  I try to follow it too..

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-01-04 10:17 AM


scorpio
Thank you for the read and nice comment.

Margherita
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6 posted 2005-01-04 12:05 PM


The North Star has caught my bow
And I am racing in the now.



Wow, dear Seymour, you always gift us with beauty in so many different shades. Oh, the North Star! You have seen it, which means you were in the Now indeed, not even racing too hard.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-01-04 12:37 PM


Margherita
You are sweet, thank you dear.

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2005-01-04 01:27 PM


Sending you a huge bowl of honey bliss! ~ and a little angel kiss!

Honey  Soup


EA

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9 posted 2005-01-04 02:06 PM


I'm late I know dear Sy...
running, running...always on the go, that's me.
BUT..I always find time to read the days offering
from my favourite PiP poet!
And this is one is a dandy..
Hope your day is a great one Sy!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-01-04 03:41 PM


Earth Angel
I accept both, thank you sweet.

Nancy,
thank you dear.

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