Open Poetry #34 |
Oh My Needing, Bleeding Heart |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beating heart laying, beating still, in want, in need, your words to fill, your seed planted, I feed, Half a heart cannot, beat alone, It yearns, it mourns, for the other part, To where it roams, across the ocean, finding its home, Two halves, make a whole, together, combined, one soul, Oh, my bleeding heart, whose tears are, filled with sorrow, Missing you, kissing you, wanting you, minute upon minute, hour upon hour, Acheing in my bones, stealing, the marrow, needing, bleeding heart, come my love, kiss the sky for me, paint my horizons, You would die for me, spilling out all of, your passions, Oh my needing, bleeding heart, aches for the other part, Come to me, let our love, sew and mend, move and blend, Together, forever, into one, forever free.......... Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-05-2005 06:08 AM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Beautifully worded..passion richly portrayed...i like it very much thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
paint my horizons Passionate, beautiful song of your longing heart. Love, Margherita |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very romantic write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Stirring, Beautiful and Romantic are your expressions of Love and of Needing the One who makes you (your heart) so very very complete. Enjoyable reading. -Bob |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how gorgeous! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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