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Open Poetry #34

You Don't

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-04 06:07 AM

You Don't Bring Me ....

Flowers
Any
More

There
a

(p)

     (e)

    (t)
             (a)

        (l)


trail
of memories
leaving behind
the passion
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2005-01-04 06:19 AM

Sad way to begin the day

I hope it gets better as the day goes on.
Love the poem. Very well expressed.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-01-04 06:30 AM

One of the most beautiful songs
regarding loss...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2005-01-04 02:18 PM

on love's
passing,
faded petals
take flight

wear some
around your
heart

know they
return
come april's
light

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-01-04 02:39 PM

I love the format of this - the dropping trail - the longing

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-01-06 07:07 AM

someone will
one day

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-01-06 07:13 AM

perhaps the flowers lay in the loss, if we could only forget about us...and remember the times when we were we?

A beauty written here....of what was and now is naught....

Hugs darlin

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2005-01-07 08:38 AM

Awwww! This is sad!

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