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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-04 06:07 AM



You Don't Bring Me ....

Flowers
Any
More

There
a



(p)          

     (e)  
              
    (t)      
             (a)        
  
        (l)            
      

trail
of memories
leaving behind
the passion
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2005 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2005-01-04 06:19 AM


Sad way to begin the day
I hope it gets better as the day goes on.
Love the poem. Very well expressed.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-01-04 06:30 AM



One of the most beautiful songs
regarding loss...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2005-01-04 02:18 PM


on love's
passing,
faded petals
take flight

wear some
around your
heart

know they
return
come april's
light

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-01-04 02:39 PM


I love the format of this - the dropping trail - the longing

  Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2005-01-06 07:07 AM


someone will
one day

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-01-06 07:13 AM


perhaps the flowers lay in the loss, if we could only forget about us...and remember the times when we were we?

A beauty written here....of what was and now is naught....

Hugs darlin

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
7 posted 2005-01-07 08:38 AM


Awwww! This is sad!
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