Open Poetry #34 |
The Mirror of Your Eyes |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The Mirror of Your Eyes ‘Tis right for poet or artist’s eye That takes up what love belies What we discern in all reality Is but conceived by one's fantasy Do see then with heart's spirit blithe Those words shared as hear it light Sung of souls met, this song sublime Gives one cause to come in time Would with thee we inhabit such delight If I eyed thee so in candle’s light To mirror me your pleasure just That thee see now, reflected trust Now Sire, seek these eyes of green Thy trust I have, this, a love’s dream This one heart holds thy passion’s flame All of which abides, in reality’s name O do please share with me twinklings Of thy spirits that roam in your dreams ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 29 October 2000 revised 24 December 2001 slightly tweaked 25 October 2004 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A lovely and delightful read, and I am glad you posted as I had not seen this the first time around.. as lovely as you are lady....SUN The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So lovely Karilea.. I too did not catch this beauty before and I'm so pleased you reposted today. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I missed this first and second time around so am happy to have found it while prospecting for a different entry. This is beautiful! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine A lovely ray of sunshine. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
And I do like what the mirror reflects when you lay yourself bare before it ~ poetically speaking, that be! Wonderful write. Linda P.S. I cannot decide which is cuter ~ you or your adorable dog! lol |
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