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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-03 01:58 AM

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

1 posted 2005-01-03 03:54 AM

a very intense write snow...such depth yet there is so much clarity in the images

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-01-03 05:29 AM

this is deep...like one could almost drown in it

awesome!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2005-01-03 09:10 AM

Some seriously stunning lines in there!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-01-03 10:14 AM

when you fish
in the fishnet stockings
I wait to be baited

I enjoy your art ms

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-01-03 10:20 AM

Wow Snow - some serious emotions written into this one - dark turmoil - felt it-

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2005-01-03 12:22 PM

You write the bloody truth in such a wonderful way.

Excellent poem, Snow

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2005-01-03 07:05 PM

Wow Snow...this is so awe-- ok! Let's just leave it at great!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

8 posted 2005-01-03 11:12 PM

Hell Yeah! Love this Snow. I know it seems dark...but the twist of the words awakens my mind and now I need to pen something dark myself. hee hee!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

9 posted 2005-01-04 01:24 PM

Cool write and read

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2005-01-04 01:26 PM

again, you have touched something inside of me...
please, don't ever stop doing that, it does make me smile!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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