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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-03 01:58 AM

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"

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1 posted 2005-01-03 03:54 AM

a very intense write snow...such depth yet there is so much clarity in the images
passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-01-03 05:29 AM

this is one could almost drown in it


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3 posted 2005-01-03 09:10 AM

Some seriously stunning lines in there!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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4 posted 2005-01-03 10:14 AM

when you fish
in the fishnet stockings
I wait to be baited

I enjoy your art ms

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5 posted 2005-01-03 10:20 AM

Wow Snow - some serious emotions written into this one - dark turmoil - felt it-


Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

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6 posted 2005-01-03 12:22 PM

You write the bloody truth in such a wonderful way.

Excellent poem, Snow

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7 posted 2005-01-03 07:05 PM

Wow Snow...this is so awe-- ok! Let's just leave it at great!


Happy 2005!

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8 posted 2005-01-03 11:12 PM

Hell Yeah! Love this Snow. I know it seems dark...but the twist of the words awakens my mind and now I need to pen something dark myself. hee hee!

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9 posted 2005-01-04 01:24 PM

Cool write and read
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10 posted 2005-01-04 01:26 PM

again, you have touched something inside of me...
please, don't ever stop doing that, it does make me smile!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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