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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-01-02 02:12 PM



In your words you said goodbye
To a world you dreamt off
As your travel lifted off
To a world you remembered
To my thoughts
You saw your world
And the world you saw
Saw you
Lightly


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1 posted 2005-01-02 02:24 PM


Very nicely penned Dave..much enjoyed!
Happy New Year!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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2 posted 2005-01-02 02:50 PM


Happy New Year Enchantress.

I hope it is an excellent one for you.

Dave

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3 posted 2005-01-02 04:29 PM


Coming back to familiar ground and being seen can mean the world.
Happy New Year, dear Dave!
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2005-01-02 05:45 PM


To capture your spirit
To free an image
That was never ever a spirit
But ideas of vision
Never to capture
An image
That spoke of spirit
In moutains of thought

And thin vines
Joining worlds

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5 posted 2005-01-02 06:27 PM


I really enjoyed this one Dave.
Happy New Year !  Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

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6 posted 2005-01-02 06:42 PM


Thanks Nightshade

Lightly has now taken it's place on my site as a series of menu options for the theme - lightly.

The davepage website is no competitor for anything.  I just want the control over what is published on the net of things I write.

regards

Dave

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7 posted 2005-01-11 04:53 AM


enjoyed


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8 posted 2005-01-11 01:28 PM


this brings much joy to my heart. very nice,thanks for sharing


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9 posted 2005-01-11 01:53 PM


well, this will be an outstanding contribution to your site...many fond returns to warm your smiles

David, this was lovely

DavePage
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10 posted 2005-01-11 05:34 PM


Thanks all

Lightly was always meant to be a series of thoughts that you could move between, go back to, think and respond to and that is why I wanted it menu driven on the site.

Yes I always go for vision and how words should be viewed, considered, and of value and I dont in the end, ever consider I shouldn't try but I get wrong and I'd rather be wrong, than never to have tried.

regards

Dave


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11 posted 2005-01-11 08:07 PM


I like this one alot.


Juju

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