Open Poetry #34 |
Saw You |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
In your words you said goodbye To a world you dreamt off As your travel lifted off To a world you remembered To my thoughts You saw your world And the world you saw Saw you Lightly |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned Dave..much enjoyed! Happy New Year! In the midst of winter, |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Happy New Year Enchantress. I hope it is an excellent one for you. Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Coming back to familiar ground and being seen can mean the world. Happy New Year, dear Dave! Love, Margherita |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
To capture your spirit To free an image That was never ever a spirit But ideas of vision Never to capture An image That spoke of spirit In moutains of thought And thin vines Joining worlds |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I really enjoyed this one Dave. Happy New Year ! Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks Nightshade Lightly has now taken it's place on my site as a series of menu options for the theme - lightly. The davepage website is no competitor for anything. I just want the control over what is published on the net of things I write. regards Dave |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this brings much joy to my heart. very nice,thanks for sharing |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, this will be an outstanding contribution to your site...many fond returns to warm your smiles David, this was lovely |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks all Lightly was always meant to be a series of thoughts that you could move between, go back to, think and respond to and that is why I wanted it menu driven on the site. Yes I always go for vision and how words should be viewed, considered, and of value and I dont in the end, ever consider I shouldn't try but I get wrong and I'd rather be wrong, than never to have tried. regards Dave |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this one alot. Juju |
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