Pardon the clouds - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-01-01 10:59 PM

Cry no more
little cloud

follow the trail
of tears
to battered fields,
where your reflection
exhibits hope
in the name
of love's
restitution,

and lay free
your woes
on the rise of
white dandelions

crowning through
the deluge,
in a shrine
for the flower
children.

** for a fellow poet, for the tsunami victims
for the clouds that feel the guilt of
their overflow **

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-02-2005 11:05 AM).]

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2005-01-01 11:02 PM

Mmmm I rarely stop in to read you inkedgoddess. Glad I decided to peak today. Loved this. Jealous I did not write it.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2005-01-01 11:15 PM

oh.... the image of the white dandelions... i'm thinking of when they start to go to seed.... how they're about to be sent into the wind....

oh my gosh this actually just gave me a shiver.... so deep the emotion went through me.

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-01-02 12:50 PM

A delicate, heart write - and I love that opening, cry no more little cloud -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2005-01-02 01:43 AM

Michele, I so admire your writing and the way you view the world! Happy New Year!

....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-01-02 05:23 AM

I love this

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2005-01-02 08:20 AM

nice woman stuff inky
soft heart
and intentional eyes

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2005-01-02 08:27 AM

inkedgoddess
A lovely write a warm ray of light.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-01-02 04:15 PM

I'm speechless.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2005-01-02 07:54 PM

Angel breath seemed to guide the heart here.
Happy New Year...
TD

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2005-01-02 08:59 PM

what a beautiful write, sister ink

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2005-01-03 11:07 AM

nice write

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2005-01-03 12:50 PM

follow the trail
of tears
to battered fields,
where your reflection
exhibits hope
in the name
of love's
restitution,

Really nice, and so beautiful, you~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2005-01-03 12:54 PM

Michele, your post-script is
as beautiful as the poem itself...

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.