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Gunslinger
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0 posted 2005-01-01 09:45 PM



Another New Year's Eve has passed,
Another  year is gone...
I know that each may be my last...
Yet I live on and on.

But what is living? I'd like to know-
Is it merely drawing breath?
If that's the case, I know a few-
Who'd gladly welcome death.

Life is for the newly weds,
When everything's a dream.
And every future seems so bright,
With scintillating beam.

And life is when you're at the top-
The Championship in view.
And death is when you're looking back,
With nothing left to do.

A few bad breaks, unlucky draws,
A broken bone or two-
And men who thought that they were iron,
Must realize they're through.

An argument; harsh, hasty words-
And love just seems to die.
And sadly two, once so in love-
Grow weary, cease to try.

And yet the years, they come and go.
And flesh dissolves to bone.
Babes are born, and old men die,
But life goes on and on.

© Copyright 2005 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-01-01 09:47 PM


I can't even tell you how much I relate to this
TexUS
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2 posted 2005-01-02 03:05 AM


Yes, life goes on...I liked the way you expressed it.  Great work!
Happy New Year to you

scorpio
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3 posted 2005-01-02 08:56 AM


Life does go on. But we can set it's course by the decisions we made. Wise words John.  Well done.  And Happy New Year.

believe in what your heart feels...

2dalimit
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4 posted 2005-01-02 09:22 AM


Good one. You've summed it up very well.

Thanks, Melton

Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-01-02 09:50 AM


Hi cowboy....
Excellent write...words that ring true.
May your 2005 be a great year!
~Happy New Year Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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6 posted 2005-01-02 10:13 AM


Life goes on indeed it does. And aren't we lucky to still be here able to write and read in Pip?!! New Year hugs, Chris
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7 posted 2005-01-02 04:09 PM


Great write John!
Happy New Year!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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