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Open Poetry #34

New Year Skin

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2005-01-01 07:30 PM

She walked by
motion by motion
filling those hypnotic hips
as explosions mounted
in streaked glass
3, 2, 1
smiles grew
as lovers knew.
watching her
smile fade
as moments melted
into the memory of a clock
her lips melted
into those of the trusted.
ring on bells of new
and move on love lorn soul
wash the stench
of a year past
off of your
new year skin.

(this would be my new years poem. I hope you all enjoy)

nice use of muffin

aim= FlyingScrew. message me if you feel.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-01-01 08:47 PM

and this would be new year's applause--

because I every much enjoyed your new year's poem.

A very subtle personification of time, and a sultry rather sexy observation of her passing by, with mingled teasing musings of what she might slip into next...

Ejoyed this very much.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-01-01 10:38 PM

Pretty Woman...
walking...

ah yes...

these are the lines
your lines
recall...

one of my favorite songs...

and this, close to that, in poem.

Thank you, m'friend.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
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