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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-01-01 05:51 PM


Tsunami (Repost)

Beds of transfiguring, moving designs
Lawlessly dancing, dark purples and blues
Like a maze of unforgiving snowflakes entwined
Gunmetal stares, firelight echoes, scissoring conviction
Leaning posses, of violent wetness, touching, scraping lips
Fleshless palms, dragging salt formations sightless
Coupling like eyeglasses, chasing occupants paralyzed
Gnashing teeth, spilling gurneys, turning 180 degrees
Groaning blanket, authoritative deadly weight

Life, looking dubiously for the dawning sun
Like a crop of tuberous begonias, desperately drowning
Criss-crossing beneath, as light entering water
Rolling out innards across tomorrow, seemingly lifeless
Knee deep in horseshoe coves…coves of frozen breakers

Dammed by the sea, nothing or no one dares oppose
Squalls of walls, dropping like tangled swords whistling blows
Aloof backdrops of water’s murky sneeze. from it’s belly, unexposed
Crammed with spinning meat grinders, tearing flesh
Bleeding dry everything in it’s path

Nods like a foreman, heels cavernous blackened openings
Torrential streams, braiding lines, unblinking incurable plague
A plague with no name, whispering Tsunami
So no one forgets….Tsunami like a hungry wolf…

Striking flatulent commotions, cylindrical waves, baptizing hell
Wrapping funerals with coffins, black magic in its spell
A liquid talisman, birthing, spraying white stalks, like war-time telegrams
Drinking a child’s soul, with fetid deadly smells
Of swamp sea grass and thorny weeds, tearing flesh, rearranging land and history

Winking condolences like a drifting dog’s rabid needs
Prowess…waking up your mind, a vengeful footbridge teasing
Animal-like whelps from every woman’s cry, clenching a stranger
In black shirts rolling like dough, cylinders rising and falling where no one goes

Like a sheeted ghost, ordering men in rows slammed shut
Sea-salt frozen on the dreaded face of time’s window
Swaying with the wind, like bugged out seething eyes
Submerged in pools swollen with pale frothing dismal brine

Dripping from rock’s tattered, twisting to look like a personal insult
Facing the storm, the warden of death, suspended in black mystery
Upon the rise and fall of surf piling in, roaring tempered engrossing sea
Swirling water’s wrath hairpins each and every cliff eaten face
Leaving a barren land, accumulating Tsunami’s slugging debris

Lifelessness spent...barren, to rebuild again


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Margherita
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1 posted 2005-01-01 05:55 PM


Literally breathtaking!
Thank you dear Lee for sharing this .... impossible to forget!
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-01-01 09:38 PM


I'm in awe
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2005-01-01 10:05 PM


i felt the passion of this write as you took me there through this tormentous time
iliana
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4 posted 2005-01-02 02:02 AM


LeeJ, this was so vivid, I found myself looking away from the words at times.  It felt like I was there.  The only way my heart can handle the agony of these days is to trust a new world is being built.   ....jo
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5 posted 2005-01-02 04:32 PM


WoW...

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

JL
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6 posted 2005-01-05 06:48 PM


Your vivid portrait is excellent.

JL

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