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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-12-31 08:22 PM


One More for the Road(tata 2004)

beyond the patio’s edge
stands an invitation
to take a load off,
rest your weary bones
warm the cockles of your heart
upon a soft cushion
of leftover snow

well
maybe not
depends on the temperature
of your cockles
at present

I’m hoping
you are not among those
that would find such
as a warming comfort,

rather that you know
greater warmth,
by far,
greater invitation,
than sitting neath
invisible stars
resting upon
lingering,
crisp, winter beauty
no matter
the softness of its cushion
or the purity of its color

©December 31, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2005-01-01 05:50 PM


  Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-01 05:57 PM


You are indeed a light in the dark

simply stunning and warmth written all over these wonderful blue pages

Thoughtful and comforting.

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