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My Minds Shampoo
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My Minds Shampoo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Minds Shampoo My audience within the blue Are to me a minds shampoo They ring the bell that peels the swell Where lay the places that I dwell Few will cross the gap of shy Without the sward and shield of why And less will open up the door To show the flowers of their core They fear the pain of non except And shut the door with shies inept They parry off the blade of thrust With fancy steps of do not trust It is a battle self imposed Where scares and wounds are still exposed Where fencing holds the field of dwell By either post or blade as well And though I open up a sauce It’s up to you to step across |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love your endings Sy a wonderful read this morning on the final moving day |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
And though I open up a sauce It’s up to you to step across may i? a wonderful word wrapping to bring in the new. and a happy and healthy to you in the florida sunshine |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweet and a very happy new year. inkedgoddess, LOL Yes you may with a healthy and Happy New Year. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
My mind needs some really good conditioner....probably needs some cleaning up as well....Well done reprobate |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toerag LOL your one of my favorite shampoos. Happy New Year |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
and I am guilty at times...   *yawn* mornin' Sy!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Watch out, my friend... I'm not just stepping... I'm JUMPING! *G* I enjoyed this very much... happy new year! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, You are a dear. Happy New Year suthern, Thank you sweetie. And a very Happy New Year to you. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Warm the sauce Sy. I'll step across. Happy New Year my friend!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Happy New Year my friend |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wait for me Sy! I'm jumping across as well. Happy New Year to you and yours Sy!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, You don't have to jump, you're already there. Happy New Year. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I'm with my sister Enchantress !! Wait for me..  Wonderful write as usual Seymour. You and yours have a wonderful New Year !! Hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh indeed, my friend, you are one saucy poet! Thank goodness! Sy, may you and Isabelle have the best of all years, and may 2005 open up many new doors and windows for you. Hugs, Sunshine |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Any sauce you open up is sure to cause a stir. Have a safe and happy new year sir. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Happy New Year, Sy!!  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Happy New Year! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You get right down to it in such a playful way! I'm not shampoo! I'm the conditioner.....hehehe. ....jo |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
happy new year, sey. loved this part: and though i open up a sauce it's up to you to step across |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Happy New Year Mark and many more. Alli, Thank you and hope yours was just as happy. iliana I believe that and have a happy new year. J.Samm Thank you my friend and hope the new year is goood to you. |
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