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Coming Across
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Coming Across |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Coming Across Sitting with thoughts at my fingertips, always wondering when those same from my heart slid down my cheeks, did you catch them... did you taste my needs or feel their warmth in full view? Forgetting to press body thoughts against body, a reason for ... staying with me for now, the reaching up missed, even if lips pressed lips and eyes met eyes allowing you to haunt me, taunt me with visions of yesterday... needs of today. I know truth and feel want, though sometimes waiting for the roses, the adornment that kisses my mind: to sleep in calm, to dream in color to lift my burdens and yes, to be happy... Stay visible to me for tomorrow is "the way to forever" and the eyes never lie... M 10/24/04 "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
What a deeply resonant poem, it just builds and builds, your voice is strong and true... ~P |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzBliss~ You 'come across' softly ... truthfully and always graciously~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Passions Your words are excellent. Hope you dont mind while I play a little fun. Dave Summer bloomed In a place Wooded Watching cricket In England Called Grace Watching as we lost Sitting with thoughts at my fingertips, always wondering when those same from my heart slid down my cheeks, did you catch them... did you taste my needs or feel their warmth in full view? Ladies bored as always Doesn't know the game Give her LBW And thinks it's just a game Always wondering on leg square Sun got's me dreaming Cotton on my head Reeling To a dance Forgetting to press body thoughts against body, a reason for ... staying with me for now, the reaching up missed, even if lips pressed lips and eyes met eyes allowing you to haunt me, taunt me with visions of yesterday... needs of today. LBW that's the trick Body in front of wicket An old trick Umpire says no Score is on Lips pressed hard Tea waits on I know truth and feel want, though sometimes waiting for the roses, the adornment that kisses my mind: to sleep in calm, to dream in color to lift my burdens and yes, to be happy... Stay visible to me for tomorrow is "the way to forever" and the eyes never lie... On a dawn A sun rises And we wonder why For a lot of people |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and the eyes never lie *sigh* |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
M, another great poem...you have such talent!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i dont know why but this poem saddens me so, but that is how i know a poem is wonderful, that emotional response, that attachment, the fact that somebody in a differnt life can feel the same way about the same things...loved this Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Stay visible to me for tomorrow is "the way to forever" and the eyes never lie... loud and clear  Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
really well written. enjoyed. |
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