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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-30 06:44 PM



spending the end of a day
like loose change
at the bar
adding it up
to make enough
for one more heartbeat high

I wore out my shoes
with my feet up
on some desk
with braces and faces
looking back at the years
above my knee pad politics

but old 04 was a good whore
the way she dressed up
for dinner 3 hundred and sixty
degrees from center
too hot to touch
but not hot enough for cookin

so now I just screw
the cap back on the mouth
of some dizzy dansani
and day dream a gray goose
with out the neck fire
of a vodka's saliva

and add an 05 to my casio's portrait

______________

Dark

© Copyright 2004 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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California
1 posted 2004-12-30 07:18 PM


Happy New Year to you, DS!!  
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-12-30 07:44 PM


Liked this D - Happy New Year to you - and a high five for '05 - think it's gonna be good

  Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
3 posted 2004-12-31 05:52 AM


what a great NY poem..wishing you a safe and happy one!
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-12-31 06:38 AM


happy new year dark
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2004-12-31 12:42 PM


You keep writing that good stuff and adjust our temperatures accordingly, this coming New Year, Sir...
Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

6 posted 2004-12-31 12:52 PM


Cool one, daddio.

You make the New Year slide in smoother than...

Hmmm. I know there's an analogy just sitting there waiting on the tip of my tongue...

Happy '05, D.

Indigo

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
7 posted 2004-12-31 02:35 PM


Happy 2005, darkie~

all the best

::New Year Kisses::
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

*Alli4000*
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since 2004-03-21
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The World of Poetry
8 posted 2004-12-31 07:09 PM


Happy New Year!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-01-01 06:10 PM


happy Happy New Year!

Wow, whata write!

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