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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2004-12-29 04:37 PM



cataclysmic these emotions
entwined so intrinsically
with your

an overwhelmingly abysmal
yet amazingly tantalizing
lure

so deliciously mystifying
to dizzying heights
the swoon

designation marked by
elation o'er the pathway
to the moon...

~tier

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-12-29 04:47 PM


oh damn Tier, this is just perfect....

I mean perfect!!

*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
2 posted 2004-12-29 06:37 PM


Amazing write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-12-30 05:27 AM


well done
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2004-12-30 09:18 AM


'an overwhelmingly abysmal
yet amazingly tantalizing
lure"

Very well said.  The push and pull of stay or run..

nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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5 posted 2004-12-31 01:19 AM


Ummmmmm....very smooth!  Happy 2005! ....jo
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