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Open Poetry #34

Point Of Meeting

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2004-12-29 04:37 PM

cataclysmic these emotions
entwined so intrinsically
with your

an overwhelmingly abysmal
yet amazingly tantalizing
lure

so deliciously mystifying
to dizzying heights
the swoon

designation marked by
elation o'er the pathway
to the moon...

~tier

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-12-29 04:47 PM

oh damn Tier, this is just perfect....

I mean perfect!!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-12-29 06:37 PM

Amazing write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-12-30 05:27 AM

well done

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2004-12-30 09:18 AM

'an overwhelmingly abysmal
yet amazingly tantalizing
lure"

Very well said. The push and pull of stay or run..

nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-12-31 01:19 AM

Ummmmmm....very smooth! Happy 2005! ....jo

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