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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-12-29 07:32 AM


Drifting

I fight the battles one on one
As I pass beneath the sun
My lance is lowered in a stance
I spur my horse to quick advance

The enemy, periphery
The flack is thick with quackery
The mist is dark upon the moor
It is a mixture of impure

Four blades swing the giants arm
The sight is fearful with alarm
But hoe I charge into the fray
Without the slightest of delay

The battle must be fought and won
There’s nothing else that can be done
To fight the foe at every turn
All those with strength that have concern

My home is worth this life I live
And life is all I have to give



© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-12-29 08:34 AM


My home is worth this life I live
And life is all I have to give

~*~

Amen...and thank you!


Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-12-29 08:56 AM


"My home is worth this life I live
And life is all I have to give"

Oh yes...well said Sy!
Hope that wrist is healing.
Not to worry..I'll pour the tea.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-12-29 09:18 AM


Sunshine
Thank you love.

Nancy,
Healing fine, but you may pour the tea.

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2004-12-29 09:22 AM


I spur my horse to quick advance

---------------------------

forget the horse...
everyone knows dragon are the way to go. lol









Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-12-29 09:26 AM


JM,
LOL haven't talked to Randy in a while.
You are too cute for cute.
Winkiewinkie

Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2004-12-29 10:44 AM




I agree with JM.... forget the horse.. and if dragons aren't handy... grab a tank..

nice to read you sir.. always

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-12-29 11:09 AM


Cpat,
My pleasure, thank you.

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2004-12-29 07:18 PM


Sy could almost sing this one...well I could  if I had a better voice


Wishing you both a Happy New Year

M

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-12-29 09:41 PM


Maureen,
Thanks for the read and you have a lovely voice. Happy New Year.

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-12-29 11:02 PM


got to this late but I'm here nevertheless
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-12-29 11:04 PM


passing,
Your a sweetheart.

suthern
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12 posted 2004-12-30 02:34 PM


Like Sunshine said... Amen! *S* Beautiful write, my friend! *S*
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-12-30 02:41 PM


suthern
Thank you love.

JL
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14 posted 2004-12-30 05:49 PM


Well said!
Great write Seymour Tabin.

JL


*Alli4000*
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15 posted 2004-12-30 06:21 PM


This is nicely written...Happy New Year!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

scorpio
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16 posted 2004-12-30 07:04 PM


Lead the charge Sy.  We're with you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2004-12-30 07:24 PM


JL
Thank you for the read and commment.

*Alli4000*
And a Happy New Year to you.

scorpio
Ok and happy new year to you.

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2004-12-31 05:59 AM


God bless the home that is worth the enlightened life that you live.

Love & Light,
EA

May 2005 be filled with joyful new adventures to keep your mind and spirit forever young!

New Year Cheer 2

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2004-12-31 08:06 AM


Earth Angel
You mean Angels will take a sip once in a while. LOL Well then a Very Happy New Year

iliana
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20 posted 2004-12-31 07:25 PM


Happy New Year, Sy!  Keep up the good fight!   ....jo
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