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the dance of love.
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the dance of love. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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standing next to you my hands quivering the snow is falling i dance i dance this familiar pattern of love is it love? maybe these feelings are exagerated because you're next to me right here right now then the world the world stops turning you face is next to mine and then it's not like you were a snowflake melted on my cheek not meant to be anything more i'm sorry it's been so long. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I did substitute refrigerated for exagerated Good simply words hard hitting yes talent Dave |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I like this. It's a lot said in a few words. Hugs,    |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Powerful words sad, yet so very beautiful. Very much enjoyed this. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I enjoyed this Chelsea!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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