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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-27 03:15 PM



the grass is greener there
on the other side
where I live part time
except when the desert calls

from across the road
and says bring me water
and a leaky bucket
for just a little while

and I will grow flowers
for your eyes
and play my wind
through veiless vales

I will dance for you
my topless trees
with the willing sand
for your footprint's sin

but the meadow calls me then
_____________

Dark

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Catrina
Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132

1 posted 2004-12-27 03:21 PM



And she shifts you
hither, and yon
and winds you
in her wind of veils
that one can only see
behind her eyes

...ah, you do inspire...

~eternal child~
Junior Member
since 2004-11-23
Posts 31

2 posted 2004-12-27 04:58 PM


"and I will grow flowers
for your eyes"

oh you've just planted the seeds...

beautiful.

~ec~

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