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0 posted 2004-12-27 11:56 AM


The hurt we feel, almost unbearable
Seems to rip our insides apart
Feeling as if within we crumble
With excruciating pain within our hearts

Our hands feel tied with bonds of pressure
As our minds we ever ponder
Of ways we can ever see each other
And live together in loves wonder

We dream together of our lives
Of how wondrous life would be
If each day we awoke together
And each others loving faces we could see

Over the years when we've had to part
When he is there and cannot leave
Instead of the feeling getting easier
The hurt in heart continues to bleed

Yet each day after day our love grows stronger
Even though we have to be apart
Distance has not any measure
When true love is growing within our hearts

Sometimes others have thought it useless
As our feelings and love continue to flourish
We still believe what we share is priceless
And from our hearts will always cherish

© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-12-27 12:09 PM


In this case, it seems absense indeeds does make the heart ~grow~ fonder! Lovely.

~Atov

Kristabell
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2 posted 2004-12-27 12:10 PM


This is so true!
Nice work!

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