Open Poetry #34 |
I Woke |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I Woke I woke upon my bed this morn And all the luxury was gone The clouds were mixing colored hue The air was missing brine of brew My shadow woke in back of me No longer did he sway at sea But followed me in lazy care And seemed to show some sorrows flair And when I made my breakfast dine He left me his but I ate mine He seemed to move a slower pace A trace of sadness seemed the case He followed me the whole day through Shifting in and out of view And gestured me a puppets dance Without it seems a flairs nuance He seems to miss the luxury The doddery of flattery |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I can't blame him...I'd miss it too just keep him close Sy shadows are always reassuring...indeed there must be light good morning dear poet I will miss you in my move today, being off the net till I figure out the wireless cable connection at my new place |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I so enjoyed the cruise we took last year... and would do it again in a heartbeat! Save your pennies, Sy...and do it again, Soon! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, I'll miss you, figure it out fast. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I'll do my best. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
My Christmas day just wouldn't be complete without a poetic twirl around the floor with your words, sweet Sy! Merry Christmas to you and Isabel! Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit We thank you and wish you the very best of Holidays. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Merry Christmas Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio And a Merry one to you too. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Here's a bit of flattery Powered by a battery You can turn it on at will You and shadow have your fill. A well phrased read for a goodly day! Merry Christmas, Mr T, I greatly enjoyed your write for today. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ken, Glad you enjoyed and have a Merry. |
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