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When The Sun Goes Down
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When The Sun Goes Down |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ As the sun goes down, I think of you And all the things we use to do There were times, when things were good I always did what I should Still, our marriage fell apart I felt the pain deep inside my heart The love I once felt from you Seemed to have left me too There were many things I did back there To show how much I did care When I am sitting here alone I think about my home The one I had to leave that day When I had to go away The things that I had to leave behind Still linger in my mind But someday, I will have all those things again And, my broken heart will mend 10-23-04 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sue...I have a photo I would like to share with you...and if you say, OK, I will...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This ends on a hopeful forward-looking note, Sue.  My wish for you, is to have the happiness you seek. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Ok, Sunshine! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe you will have the things that you desire...but I know that is hard to believe until you have those things...hoping for good things for you...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sue, you are a writer of touching poetry, from the heart |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Follow this link, Sue... your poem brought this to mind... http://karilea.netpoets.net/graphics/sundown%20over%20bluestem.jpg |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Sue and it's so good to read you again. Things have a way of falling into place.. and I'm sure they will with you soon. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
positive and cheerful, despite heartache....you have penned much faith and excitement for what is to come....enjoyed. Hugs...Lee J. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sue, this hurts, but in the same moment I feel your strength and good will to overcome the pain and to look forward. Beautiful, touching write. Love, Margherita  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQ~ Not only will you have 'those things' again ... you will have MORE~ You've come a long way and there is new love waiting just around the next bend~ You'll see~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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