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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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There is a grey pall over all your views. Life didn't turn out the way you hoped or planned. After work in the parking lot you slowly walk to your car: a swan, alone in the local pond, (shades of night upon the hour), who sadly moves as circles round the vacant space within her heart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this one could have held my name |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You write sheer beauty. Don't be disappointed if few people answer a poem....this place is unpredictable, to put it mildly... HOWEVER -- This one goes to the top, where it belongs! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is hauntingly beautiful... very much enjoyed!! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Agree with Nancy.. Well done..  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Kick-A-punch----Oooou this is good! ~Atov |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice write! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"who sadly moves as circles round the vacant space within her heart." I shall cry not for her but for how you felt about her. |
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