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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-12-22 08:35 PM




*
Actively alluding
to elusive illusions
and obvious alliterations
often obliterates obfuscation,
obviating the need to obliterate
opportunistic oratories.
An om opportunity.
*



© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-12-22 09:26 PM


smile

I remember this'n.

And I love the clever of it, prolly more the second time. The ingenuity lies in that it does what it observes, and invites the reader to do likewise.



Much enjoyed. Again.

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2 posted 2004-12-23 01:09 PM


Am om opportunity!  lol  -- loved this, Kacy!
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3 posted 2004-12-23 08:08 PM


glad you enjoyed this, lady Karen
thanks, Jo! have a great holiday

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4 posted 2004-12-24 07:47 AM


now that's a tongue twister!
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5 posted 2004-12-24 06:29 PM


Loved this!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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6 posted 2004-12-26 07:33 PM


Great write!

Eric

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7 posted 2004-12-26 07:57 PM


Alliteration always eludes me but
active alertness to eligible lissome lasses enables a hale heartbeat.  

Well done.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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8 posted 2004-12-26 09:08 PM


LOL, Ken, that's a funny reply, and literally alliterative.
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