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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-10-19 11:09 PM

Fantasy smiles in candlelit shadows
Turning silence like smoke in the silhouette of us
The way that fills in empty hours and welling needs
Making us into colors unfamiliar and cool
Surfaces and undertow, like friends spilled and blended
Turning knots of allure, excess gold left shimmering on the surface
Fantasy smiles in the hall between doors
Making finger puppets on the walls, caresses of the cuffs beneath the sash
Gradually mouthing secrets and refilling the shape of deeper
Always more, and never less
Quietly in flood, guided by the mind devouring want
Replacing the necessity of empty in its shallow
An overflow where visions make wet the night

Copyright Kkh 10/19/04

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

1 posted 2004-10-20 04:39 AM

A lingering sense of sensuality and soothing calm. Charming work, Kathy.

Robert Joseph

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2004-10-20 10:46 AM

good write
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-10-20 01:43 PM

Like it a lot TD

Dave

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2004-10-20 02:28 PM

Fantasy smiles in candlelit shadows
Turning silence like smoke in the silhouette of us

Turning knots of allure, excess gold left shimmering on the surface

Quietly in flood, guided by the mind devouring want
Replacing the necessity of empty in its shallow
An overflow where visions make wet the night
*********************

Some very cool lines in this one and images to saturate the mind with. A true gift of chemistry between two. Loved it.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-10-20 05:31 PM

passion filled, chock full of tasty metaphors, a hint of spice and a dash
of delight...what a perfect blending.

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

6 posted 2004-10-24 12:33 PM

Kathy, you've spelled magic in this passionate unfolding of the heart's pages.

Greatly enjoyed.

Robert Joseph

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