Open Poetry #34 |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I Neither firm nor firmament under the oak, elm, or even the low hedge on Herron lane. It’s two foot height constant for forty years, maginot line corralling fear with naiveté, stunted by angry X’s from skinny wrists, set jaws. Those were the icebergs whose roots assumed mother’s on Thanksgiving, kids at Christmas and warmth from a fire’s photograph. A mercurial song commenced without lyrics, operatic tones including all the ang’s echoed oblong emotions, unspoken, unwritten notes. II The Ironweed’s anger is covert. It grapples in clutches, squatter’s rights guarded by heavily accented grumblings. Needing little, it is fierce in its claims on the stingy fringes behind bounty’s dumpster, jealous enough to die of thirst. Its quick and purple bud, the ruse of honest offering, rushes the season as protection, like the lamb's blood on the doorpost. III These are the magnolia leaves, complaining in plastic barks as the metal rake gathers them like grubs in a primordial, patient hunger. Clattering shells the color of long attic’d naugahyde long retired from sickly visits, forgotten bus trips to (and from) brown hope. Soon, after winter’s amnesia, the magnolia, forgetting the weary burden of its hand grenade cone, will don its silly hats. IV Life’s toll for the tumbleweed is pieces and seeds. A migrant/stow-a-way dressed proletariat with faces rubbed blanched, blurry. Seamless gypsy whose stolen children are shaved and posed in southwestern décor though they were worthless nuisance or arsonist to natives. Avoid the wind and you’ll not notice them. They’re freest where others won’t encamp, they die in quiet wither, whither thou not goest |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The Ironweed’s anger is covert. It grapples in clutches, squatter’s rights guarded by heavily accented grumblings. Needing little, it is fierce in its claims on the stingy fringes behind bounty’s dumpster, jealous enough to die of thirst. Its quick and purple bud, the ruse of honest offering, rushes the season as protection, like the lamb's blood on the doorpost. the images you cast in this write Richard are incredible....and so very sad that the images it brings to my mind are to often a reality. Happy Holidays to you sir.. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-22-2004 02:53 PM).] |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I agree with Gentle Spirit about your excellent imagery. (I don't really know how to respond positively because of the mood it left me in. Some things just are unfair and it's hard to deal with injustice.) A very powerful, well written piece! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Part I... reminded me of a family across the street many states ago the shrubbery of 20 years time was no larger in size and height than the day they had first been planted, the master of the house being that anal-retentive, strictured with structure as he was; and those shrubs should have been the give-away prior to the garden hose slapped across the wife's back... Yes, it was reported... but amazing, how I had put that away, until today. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Avoid the wind and you’ll not notice them. They’re freest where others won’t encamp," gotta love a poet who understands a magnolia thank you for this one lovie, quite moving |
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