Open Poetry #34 |
unused ocean |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
always did wonder why odin took the virgins and loki liked the whores til I danced a few then it was obvious like windows sills and doors one was for lookin out and the other for travel gettin there instead of talking about the trip or leanin on the bow lookin for wearable love in an unused ocean _____________ Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-22-2004 09:06 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you come up with the most unique lines Ds. Good morning. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
use me (please) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
one was for lookin out and the other for travel gettin there instead of talking about the trip or leanin on the bow lookin for wearable love in an unused ocean ~*~ always leaving behind tidbits of thought...full...ness |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"unused ocean" and that would be a huge shame.. this is perfection D! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Loki is a hottie... lol... Merry Christmas, Dark... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
gs, thanx lady friend for your eyes and smiles __________________ ms inky..mmmmmmmmmmm hell yes, and ditto (grin) ______________ ms sunshine, thanks for the depth of thought and the reads, you bless me ___________ ms susie c, bring that little boat on down and spank the tide with your pretty paddle..thanks lady for your touch ______________ ms bbg, yes maaam loki is the candy man, got cravings? jolly holly to you too lil one. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Loki - hope he gets lucky Odin may know the ordinary - but perhaps that is his ocean he likes to swim in - Enjoyed this D - and I agree - Loki has his needs - but am glad there are those who like their virgins too - Hugs - S Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms susan..virgins are a one time thing then what? thanks for the read |
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