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Red - for Inkedgoddess
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Red - for Inkedgoddess |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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Red Red is warm fire cozy Soft blushed cheeks red rosy As red red wine shimmers With red delight it delivers Red is the drape of flowing satin Dressing desires of rising passion As red red lips pout pretty Beneath red tresses falling flirty Red is in the rose petals scattered And in blood rush red skin slathered As beads of dew glow glisten My red lust love doth thee christen s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely lovely Susan!! I especially love the second stanza!! Holiday hugs~Nancy |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan, you write beautifully, My God, this is lovely in its solemn plea . .. and much appropriate for Miss Inked (red) How lucky, the both of you . .. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you've said with the passion that it speaks red is life and death all that lays between thanks for indulging me  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I just read you so I hearby state you are red |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Loved it Susan. You just made me smile. lol |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you for your warmth and gift of replies my friends - I am rosy with pleasure - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, I really liked the dance of words in that last stanza!  ......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write Susan! |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Red is passion and passionately you write, Aren't we color? I think red would suit you fine! Lovely! Atov... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow Susan!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you friends - warm heart hugs this chill morning  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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