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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-12-21 02:20 PM


Yellow

Sip the first taste of spring
From the sweet of yellow butter cup
Laugh beneath daisy bright light
Shining from yellow petals pretty
Bathe in happy face yellow
Twirling carefree in yellow checked dress
Beneath the yellow bravado
Spilled form the sun
Smiling in delight
As the yellow haired princess
Dances alongside thee
With yellow ribbons dangling
And birds sing a yellow feel melody
On a lemonade fine day

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-12-21 02:26 PM


Bathe in happy face yellow
Twirling carefree in yellow checked dress
Beneath the yellow bravado
Spilled form the sun
Smiling in delight


this makes me long for a summer day on what is a chilly day here....well done Susan, this is so pretty.

Susan
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Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-12-21 02:57 PM


Thank you Donna - just thinking of spring/summer and the yellow of the days - yellow to me is happy -

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2004-12-21 03:34 PM


Yellow is the color of my true love's hair
In the morning, when we rise
In the morning, when we rise
That's the time
(That's the time)
That's the time
(That's the time)
I love the best
........DONOVAN mr. yellow mellow himself

yes, yellow's a trip into the unexpected for me

DO RED NEXT, okay?


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-12-21 03:35 PM


Beautiful Susan...Yellow colors me happy!
Hugs~

     Season's Greetings!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-12-21 04:21 PM


Your kind replies color me yellow happy -

Thanks -     Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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