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Open Poetry #34

Laden Void

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-12-21 02:20 PM

Still touching.

You linger in my hands as the
space you leave behind.

Even as my fingers curl in an
empty grip of yearning.

Nothing remains in your absence.

And so my hands caress this
laden void.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-12-21 02:24 PM

Only you could make something from nothing and make it feel lovely-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-12-21 02:25 PM

oh this is so very beautiful.....mmm...lovely.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-12-21 02:30 PM

whew...so much in so few words. Outstanding!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2004-12-21 02:35 PM

Could anyone write empty more beautifully???

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-12-21 02:43 PM

A poetry-laden void...

Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-12-21 02:56 PM

So beautiful Eric!

Season's Greetings!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2004-12-21 03:22 PM

Beautiful, Eric!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-12-21 07:00 PM

Truest love is like that, consuming empty spaces and leaving full the grip in times of empty.
Magical write Eric.
TD

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

9 posted 2004-12-21 08:09 PM

Fantastic write Eric!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-12-21 08:18 PM

thank you for sharing this emotion

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