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Beyond The Bruise Of Yesterday
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Beyond The Bruise Of Yesterday |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Beyond The Bruise Of Yesterday ~*Marge Tindal*~ One held-back tear desperately seeking cheek A sob that should flow pools in the surround of grief inbound forgetting just how one lets it go Dark memory in need of expel seeks a quell ending the sorrow Yesterday’s bruise darkens seeping into a blue tomorrow~ ~I have no idea where these thoughts came from, or to whom they belong ...~ Darkly different from me ... outside the box maybe ? |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is deep and insightful. Nice poem, Marge. love, Barb |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Marge - where ever they came from, they flow beautifully in blue -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very different for you Marge, but, oh so well done! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outside the box is good sometimes |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vastly outside your zone of real, Marge...perhaps the hurricanes of your seasonal experience left a mark deeper than you thought... one could aptly imagine that your lovely state has been bruised beyond the norm...I know, for I have visited [although it has been some years...] and I know it as a lush, lusty verdant and vibrant experience... so if so many hammering episodes left it bruised, then there you have it, Psych 101... I worried about all of the state, and all of our poet friends that we know so well via our blue halls... I am so glad that all came through it safely, albeit, a bit of battered and bruised...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a bit of someone else's reality just sat upon your heart and mind for a moment, and borrowed your quill |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Sad thoughts just pop up sometimes! How good that you can turn them into memorable poetry! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This certainly different for you but as usual very good. Love ya, Betty |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well Marge, no matter what you write about, you do it well. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis You are filled with empathy and compassion, it is no surprise to me that another's tears would flow from your eyes.  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A beautiful write PoetFriend... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps it truly was written from inside the box. Wherever there be Light (and you have lots of that Dear One!) there lurks a bit of Dark to balance our yin yang! lol Hugs to you this fine Fall morning, EO |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all for your kind comments to this piece~ The answer 'to whom they belong' came to my email box ...~ (Bless you my friend)  This 'specially brave lady asked for permission to use this for a web page ... of course I granted it~ IF we can help ONE ... we can help MANY~ I know not the 'why' of the 'voices' ... but I do know when to 'listen' and pass the words on~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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