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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2004-12-20 08:39 PM



Earth, like a minion found on a lactate coated platter,
bound by delirium and format.
Always listing a confused decision,
allowing the rest to be what they think.
Spun by the ego crop
allowing the surrounds we breathe,
to guide our own declared sand castles.
Washed away by how smart
we think to be.
What holds you still, droned and settled - in this spin?
When the rest wonder why,
you've learned to love only days
of yourself.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-12-20 09:40 PM


What holds you still, droned and settled - in this spin?

love that question
methinks you think much

mysticpoe
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2 posted 2004-12-20 11:06 PM


Good to hear from you again Midnite...and yes, I think, I think too much. Thanks again.

wayne

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