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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-12-20 03:54 PM

I like how your heart twinkles
with roses for me,
from across the sky forest,
and i can make eyes
right back at you,
safe in my own canvas,
to shake my bootie hot
and make mush
of the tall mantree
in his plaid,

too many trees weep
wet between us

winter's a rough one
and barely a day goes by
without the heart longing
for what fools like us
still hear in the echoes of whispers,

let's dance our sunshadows
together,
in a merangee of mangoes,
from across
this cracked dancefloor,

spin me silly you wildman
and rock me hard dizzy

you're a crazy one !!!

tap your fingertips upon
my long legged stilettoes,

look
but don't touch me yet

just give me a wink wink
and let me feel beautiful
still strutting high headed
without losing my love pride,

i can't let you
take me..... just yet,
though our extensions
reach high,
in the quake of desire,

you're magical
as i watch from afar
(for now)

i think
that i would love
to touch you
sometime

but i stand better poised
without meeting you,
your eyes laced with kryptonite,
(and i haven't the strenght
for the pain again)

maybe our last leaves
will do the dancing for us,
meeting high in the crosswinds
shaking in their wintercoats
sealing us within them,
with a late evening snow kiss.

(inspired)

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-21-2004 08:06 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-12-20 04:01 PM

damn fine read...

I enjoyed

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-12-20 04:57 PM

I like how your heart twinkles
with roses for me,
from across the sky forest
and i can make eyes
right back at you,
safe in my own canvas,
to shake my bootie hot
and make mush
of the tall mantree
in his plaid,

too many trees weep
wet between us

winter's a rough one
and barely a day goes by
without the longing
for what hearts like ours
still hear in the echoes of whispers

A damn fine read indeed...Sigh.

it's a keeper

mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-12-20 05:25 PM

You always write a million dollars

Dave

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-12-20 06:27 PM

Michelle, this is terrific -- I love the frankness and honesty of it and yet it was dancing at the same time. Happy Holiday!

.......jo

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2004-12-20 06:37 PM

inspired . . . uh-huh . . . I wanna hear the rest of this story . . .

it is beautiful writing, Michele

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-12-20 06:43 PM

Fantastic write Michele..
sure took the chill off this last day of Autumn.
Hugs~

Season's Greetings!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-12-20 07:08 PM

Enjoyed the flirtatious tone of this, the lover's dance of it -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

8 posted 2004-12-20 07:12 PM

~Clapping exuberantly---this is a great ball of flirty fire and just enough sassy sway! Yay! I likes a lot!

~Atov ;-)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2004-12-20 07:24 PM

Came back to say....
Congratulations on your milestone post!!!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-12-20 11:03 PM

thanks kids

nancy thanks so much; didnt even realize this milestone
only about 20,000 to catch up to some of you

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

11 posted 2004-12-20 11:34 PM

wink,wink...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2004-12-21 04:18 AM

You're all heart goldielocks, and that's the best part.

Nevermind the crazy part....it's what's in your basket that counts,
and yours is always so ripe and refreshing.

May your holidays be filled with wet ink.

I wish you love, always~ Hugs Michele~

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

13 posted 2004-12-21 07:57 AM

"winter's a rough one
and barely a day goes by
without the longing
for what hearts like ours
still hear in the echoes of whispers"

Aye, 'tis surely true.

A totally great piece of writing, but I enjoyed these words most.

Billy 8)

"If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it."
Albert Einstein

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2004-12-21 07:57 AM

"too many trees weep
wet between us

winter's a rough one
and barely a day goes by
without the heart longing
for what fools like us
still hear in the echoes of whispers"

blow me away lines....

maybe we should all take the times to dance among the trees...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

15 posted 2004-12-21 08:02 AM

ms inky, enjoyed this piece..
but don't be afraid
it is just a piercing
and it don't hurt for long

trust me
I ran over a doctor once

(grin)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

16 posted 2004-12-21 09:19 AM

reading this makes me think, hmmmmm, she's got a new love....or perhaps an old love
who now realizes what he had and lost....smiles and hugs
Happy Christmas

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

17 posted 2004-12-21 07:10 PM

Awesome write Michele! Happy Holidays!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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