Open Poetry #34 |
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Each creature’s spirit paints the sky |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
Each creature’s spirit paints the sky In a unique color of goodbye As it flies into the next realm, Guided by whatever light That being lived its life within. That is what I believe. For those we’ve known whose spirit shone With true pure colors of love’s light, We must let them go where they must, With a smile and a hug and a kiss, As we let them know they will be missed, but never forgotten. I know you shall journey in love’s light. * |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful sentiments Kacy, and hugs to you... |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nicely written ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Kacy...well said. I agree whole-heartedly. Heart hugs. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful words on a very difficult subject Kacy ![]() |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
kacy, this is beautiful. and sad and encouraging at the same time. and so hard. ~a. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the way you think of this. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, this comes from a beautiful heart. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Ethel |
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stilltogether Member
since 2004-07-28
Posts 58Georgia, USA |
Thank you so much for this beautiful poem... I will print it out and show him. He finally agreed to be admitted to the actual hospice house today.. just for awhile. He needs to be there so they can help him more than we can at home. He is so brave.. and his will to live is incredible.. Love, Mary It's Not About Age, It's About Life |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Each creature’s spirit paints the sky In a unique color of goodbye As it flies into the next realm, Guided by whatever light That being lived its life within. That is what I believe." Kacy, I think I will adopt your belief system; makes a lot of sense to me and you said it so beautifully. ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks to each of you for your loving replies. And Mary, I hope they can help Michael be more comfortable in his last days, and to provide you with some comfort as well. We love him, too. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Kacy Many people write religious oriented poems on this subject..I usually shy away from them, though I never condemn them...I am always very pleased to find one, once in a while that is very spiritual, written in the context of the reality that I have become aware of, such as this one. Thank You __________ice/ford ><> |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thank you very much for that reply, Ford |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
All I can say is this is awesome! As everything you write! ![]() Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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