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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-12-19 10:42 AM


To the pretty little darling
With blue diamonds in her eyes
That are deeper than the oceans
And more lovely than the skies,

I'll write this poem of passion.
My words are sweet and true.
So maybe I'll express to her
This poets point of view.

I see the pretty flowers
In the gardens of the world
But none are quite as beautiful
As this precious little girl.

Her lips are soft like velvet
Her hair is silky lace
Her smile is like a thousand jewels
That adorn her gorgeous face.

Her voice is that of angels
That sing sweet lovers' tune.
The crickets sing with envy
As they seranade the moon.

Within her touch is magic.
She chants her spell of flight
On my hardened heavy heart
And it sails amongst the heights.

I've never known the likes of her
I've never known her kind,
But I've never sought for treasure
Though, treasure now i find.

Of all the pleasures in this world
Yes all the greatest things
I adore the sweetest little girl
That gave me back my wings.

~ the stuff dreams are made of ~
          

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1 posted 2004-12-19 11:04 AM


awww...geez this is SO sweet! I like it when you write like this
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2 posted 2004-12-19 08:21 PM


You write the best romance poems!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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